After feedback and my own editing I finished the drawing stage of the animatic.
I then met with several drama students and volunteers and recorded the voice work. It worked out really well.
I then moved onto the more difficult part- adding all the audio. I received a really good piece of music back from my collaboration with a sound student which made things slightly easier, but I still needed to add the foley and level everything. It took me about a week and a half but i think I have a version that will allow me to animate to it-