After the formative assessment I got told to change the characters face to something more detailed and to redraw a few scenes to be more effective. These were things I had picked up myself so I knew I had to change them.
Below is the current version-
In some version the face really works but I’m not sure in other keys. As it was before, the more colour I add the more messy my line work is revealed to be.
Apart from that, I think it’s really coming along well and should become a good piece of animation.
Here is the new character design for the human-